JOHN CROWE RANSOM TAKES ON BAUDELAIRE IN THE MODERN BRACKET

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Ransom was the Southern American T.S. Eliot. He battles ‘the Father,’ Baudelaire.

Charles Baudelaire and John Crowe Ransom are icons of Modernism.

Ransom, the New Critic, defined Modernism explicitly, brilliantly, in his little known essay, “Poets Without Laurels, which he published in 1938. Baudelaire, closer to the origins of it, but just as self-consciously, in his Art criticism, defined Modernism, too.

Temperamentally, Ransom and Baudelaire are quite different: Baudelaire is the dandified Modernsist-rebel, Ransom, the stuffy Modernist-matter-of-fact. The arc of Modernism from Baudelaire to Ransom is highly instructive, though: the Modernist “rebel” of the 19th century is erased by Modernity’s 20th century “victory;” Baudelaire’s cry of “Join the Artificial Revolution!” is a tad redundant when it rings out in the 20th century surrounded by skyscrapers, airplanes, and TVs.

Baudelaire rebelled against nature: “Woe to him who, like Louis XV [died 1774] carries his degeneracy to the point of no longer having a taste for anything but nature unadorned.” The 18th century—which featured Pope saying Art is nothing but the Greeks and Nature, and which prepared the way for Romanticism’s humble embrace of the same—found itself attacked by Baudelaire:

We know that when [Louis XV’s mistress] wished to avoid receiving the king, she made a point of putting on rouge. It was quite enough, it was her way of closing the door. It was in fact by beautifying herself that she used to frighten away her royal disciple of nature.

But when we reach the 20th century, it is no longer possible to be a rebel by hating nature—for nature had been overthrown. Rousseau and his Nature worship becomes the hero of protest; Warhol’s Brillo Boxes are sarcastic, ironic: a joke at the expense of Baudelaire’s sacred artificiality. Post-modernism freed us from Modernism’s Futuristic and Artificial Pride by laughing at it—but unfortunately, or not, Modernism has had the last laugh: artificiality, like it or not, has won. Louis XV and Al Gore are both seen to love nature artificially, and what seems more artificial to us now than Alexander Pope? Cosmetics are all the rage, and nature poets are wise more than they are natural, just as natural and organic diet gurus are wise; American poetry, whether it is rap, Slam, Ashbery, or Collins, could not be more artificial or more removed from nature poetry: even Mary Oliver is wise rather than natural; we kill trees to publish books on saving trees. Baudelaire is an anti-Nature prophet, then, more than he is a rebel: he looked around at the teeming cities, the material improvements, the women making themselves lovely and available with their cosmetics and their freedom, and thought: here is the Future. As Baudelaire put it in his essay, “In Praise of Cosmetics:”

Nature teaches us nothing. I admit that she compels man to sleep, to eat, to drink, and to arm himself as well as he may against the inclemencies of the weather; but it is she too who incites man to murder his brother, to eat him, to lock him up and torture him; for no sooner do we take leave of the domain of needs and necessities to enter that of pleasures and luxury than we see that Nature can counsel nothing but crime. It is this infallible Mother Nature who has created patricide and cannibalism, and a thousand other abominations that both shame and modesty prevent us from naming. On the other hand it is philosophy (I speak of good philosophy) and religion which command us to look after our parents when they are poor and infirm. Nature, being none other than the voice of our self-interest, would have us slaughter them.

A prophet, indeed; for Hitler, Mao, Stalin, and Pol Pot were primitives who followed nature; they had no philosophy or religion. Philosophy and religion are means to fend off nature’s ultimate, all-encompassing self-interestedness—and find pleasure and sanity in a more subtle and piecemeal and laissez faire sort of way. Good philosophy listens to a host of small voices, and ignores the big ones. Communists and fascists are not philosophers and religious fanatics are not religious. Communists, fascists, and religious fanatics listen to the big voices. You would never find any of them speaking as Baudelaire does here:

Woman is quite within her rights, indeed she is even accomplishing a kind of duty, when she devotes herself to appearing magical and supernatural; she has to astonish and charm us; as an idol, she is obliged to adorn herself in order to be adored. Thus she has to lay all the arts under contribution for the means of lifting herself above Nature, the better to conquer hearts and rivet attention. It matters but little that the artifice and trickery are known to all, so long as their success is assured and their effect always irresistible. By reflecting in this way the philosopher-artist will find it easy to justify all the practices adopted by women at all times to consolidate and as it were to make divine their fragile beauty.

Whether this is sexist rot or women’s liberation brilliantly and empathetically imparted, we are sure this is not how the Ayatollahs or the Communists or the Nazis talk: it is a beautiful antidote to that. It is a small voice worth listening to.

Ransom, in his description of Modernsim, is equally trivial and modest; Modernism, as Ransom sees it, is simply a practical method in which expertise is fragmented to handle things compartmentally. This might not be ideal. But Ransom essentially agrees with Baudelaire; he is talking in the same way. Ransom sees Modernism as that which rejects nature and big schemes and listens to the individual and his or her small voice, even if this produces a certain amount of alienation and dullness. We’ll quote the beginning of Ransom’s essay, “Poets Without Laurels,”; note how Ransom uses fanaticism’s “red banner” jokingly and ironically. Ransom begins with poetry; he then moves into Modernism as it applies to all aspects of life:

The poets I refer to in the title are the “moderns:” those whom a small company of adept readers enjoys, perhaps enormously, but the general public detests; those in whose hands poetry as a living art has lost its public support.

Consequently I do not refer to such poets as Edna St. Vincent Millay and Robert Frost, who are evidently influenced by modernism without caring to “go modern” in the sense of joining the revolution; which is very much as if they had stopped at a mild or parlor variety of socialism, when all about them the brave, or at least the doctrinaire, were marching under the red banner. Probably they are wise in their time; they have laurels deservedly and wear them gracefully. But they do not define the issue which I wish to discuss. And still less do I refer to poets like E.A Robin. son, Sturge Moore, and John Masefield, who are even less modern; though I have no intention of questioning their laurels either. I refer to poets with no laurels.

I do not wish to seem to hold the public responsible for their condition, as if it had suddenly become phlegmatic, cruel, and philistine. The poets have certainly for their part conducted themselves peculiarly. They could not have estranged the public more completely if they had tried; and smart fellows as they are, they know very well what they have been doing, and what they are still stubborn in doing, and what the consequences are.

For they have failed more and more flagrantly, more and more deliberately, to identify themselves with the public interests, as if expressly to renounce the kind affections which poets had courted for centuries.

Poets used to be bards and patriots, priests and prophets, keepers of the public conscience, and, naturally, men of public importance. Society crowned them with wreaths of laurel, according to the tradition which comes to us from the Greeks and is perpetuated by official custom in England—and in Oklahoma. Generally the favor must have been gratefully received. But modern poets are of another breed. It is as if all at once they had lost their prudence as well as their piety, and formed a compact to unclasp the chaplet from their brows, inflicting upon themselves the humility of delaureation, and retiring from public responsibility and honors. It is this phenomenon which has thrown critical theory into confusion.

Sir Philip Sidney made the orthodox defense of poetry on the ground of the poet’s service to patriotism and virtue.

“He doth not only show the way, but giveth so sweet a prospect into the way, a will entice any man to enter into it”

And what was the technique of enticement?

“With a tale forsooth he cometh unto you, with a tale which holdeth children from play, and old men from the chimney corner”

The poets, therefore, told entrancing tales, which had morals. But the fact was, also, that the poets were not always content to win to virtue by indirection, or enticement, but were prepared to preach with almost no disguise, and to become sententious and repetitious, and the literature which they created is crowded with precise maxims for the moralists. There it stands on the shelves now. Sometimes the so-called poet has been only a moralist with a poetic manner. And all the poets famous in our tradition, or very nearly all, have been poets of a powerful moral cast.

Ransom is trying to hide his bias in talking about the old poets; he is trying very hard not to show his hand—which is full of “moderns.” He succeeds, we think; I doubt even one in a hundred readers would be able to detect in Ransom’s carefully worded rhetoric his flagrant hatred of the old poet, together with his deep prejudice in favor of the “modern” poet.

First of all, who is Ransom talking about when he says, “the poets…were prepared to preach with almost no disguise?” The “poets famous in our tradition” are precisely those who transcend mere moralizing; further, Ransom writes of “precise maxims for the moralists” as if morality did not belong to him and you and me, but thrived in a shadowy group of inquisitorial persons to which the old poets like Sidney were slaves: “the moralists.” Who are these “moralists?” They are nobodies. They are the unnamed invention of Mr. Ransom, who intends to snatch autonomy away from the old poets and make them seem mere servants—as opposed to the “moderns,” who happen—who just happen—to be ambitious poets who are friends of the critic and poet Mr. Ransom. (Ransom examines “modern” poems by Mr. Stevens—“pure” and Mr. Tate —“obscure” in “Poets Without Laurels.”) Poe explicitly wrote on disguising one’s morals; did Poe, one of the “poets famous in our tradition” as referenced by Ransom, write only to invent “precise maxims for the moralists?” Or Baudelaire? Did Baudelaire busy himself in making “precise maxims for the moralists?” Dante, Milton, Shakespeare, Keats, Byron, Coleridge, Shelley, Tennyson, Browning? Did they all throw their souls into the task of making “precise maxims for the moralists?” Really, Mr. Ransom?

We felt it was only fair to expose, for our Scarriet readers, the grubby truth underlying Ransom’s effort, which we nevertheless consider brilliant (if crooked and corrupt) in its gloss on Modernism. Again, to pick up Ransom where he left us:

So I shall try a preliminary definition of the poet’s traditional function on behalf of society: he proposed to make virtue delicious. He compounded a moral effect with an aesthetic effect. The total effect was not a pure one, but it was rich, and relished highly. The name of the moral effect was goodness; the name of the aesthetic effect was beauty. Perhaps these did not have to coexist, but the planners of society saw to it that they should; they called upon the artists to reinforce morality with charm. The artists obliged.

Note how Ransom slyly implies the “planners of society” are telling Shakespeare and Poe what to do. But no one would call the New Critics, who worked with the U.S. Government as Education officials (poetry textbook writers) or Ezra Pound or T.S. Eliot, or any of the “moderns,” those laurel-less renegades, “planners of society.” Ransom, the non-planner, continues:

When they had done so , the public did not think of attempting to distinguish in its experience as reader the glow which was aesthetic from the glow which was moral. Most persons probably could not have done this; many persons cannot do it today. There is yet no general recognition of the possibility that an aesthetic effect may exist by itself, independent of morality or any other useful set of ideas. But the modern poet is intensely concerned with this possibility, and he has disclaimed social responsibility in order to secure this pure aesthetic effect. He cares nothing, professionally, about morals, or God, or native land. He has performed a work of dissociation and purified his art.

There are distinct styles of “modernity,” but I think their net results, psychologically, are about the same. I have in mind what might be called the “pure” style and what might be called the “obscure” style.

A good “pure” poem is Wallace Stevens’ “Sea Surface Full of Clouds…”

Poetry of this sort, as it was practiced by some French poets of the nineteenth century, and as it is practiced by many British and American poets now, has been called pure poetry, and the name is accurate. It is nothing but poetry; it is poetry for poetry’s sake, and you cannot get a moral out of it. But it was expected it would never win the public at large. …

As an example of “obscure” poetry, I cite Allen Tate’s “Death of Little Boys.” …

Tate has an important subject, and his poem is a human document, with a contagious fury about it: Stevens, pursuing purity, does not care to risk such a subject. But Tate, as if conscious that he is close to moralizing and sententiousness, builds up deliberately, I imagine, an effect of obscurity; for example, he does not care to explain the private meaning of his windowpane and his Norwegian cliff; or else, by some feat, he permits these bright features to belong to his total image without permitting them to reveal any precise meaning, either for himself or for his reader. …

Pure or obscure, the modern poet manages not to slip into the old-fashioned moral-beautiful compound. …

Personally, I prefer the rich obscure poetry to the thin pure poetry. The deaths of little boys are more exciting than the sea surfaces. It may be that the public preference, however, is otherwise. The public is inclined simply to ignore the pure poetry, because it lacks practical usefulness; but, to hate the obscure poetry, because it looks important enough to attend to, and yet never yields up any specific fruit. Society, through its spokesmen the dozens of social-minded critics, who talk about the necessity of “communication,” is now raging with indignation, or it may be with scorn, against the obscure poetry which this particular generation of poets has deposited. Nevertheless, both types of poetry, obscure as well as pure, aim at poetic autonomy; that is, speaking roughly, at purity.

Modern poetry in this respect is like modern painting. European painting used to be nearly as social thing as poetry. It illustrated the sacred themes prescribed by the priests, whether popularly (Raphael) or esoterically and symbolically (Michelangelo)… But more or less suddenly it asserted its independence. So we find Cezanne, painting so many times and so lovingly his foolish little bowl of fruits. …

Apostate, illaureate, and doomed to outlawry the modern poet may be. I have the feeling that modernism is an unfortunate road for them to have taken. But it was an inevitable one. …

Poets have had to become modern because the age is modern. Its modernism envelops them like a sea, or an air. Nothing in their thought can escape it.

Modern poetry is pure poetry. The motive behind it cannot be substantially different from the motive behind the other modern activities, which is certainly the driving force of all our modernism. What is its name? “Purism” would be exact, except  that it does not have the zealous and contriving sound we want. “Puritanism” will describe this motive…

The development of modern civilization has been a grand progression in which Puritanism has invaded first one field and then another.

The first field was perhaps religion. The religious impulse used to join to itself and dominate and hold together nearly all the fields of human experience; politics, science, art, and even industry, and by all means moral conduct. But Puritanism came in the form of the Protestant Reformation and separated religion from all its partners. Perhaps the most important of these separations was that which lopped off from religion the aesthetic properties…the ceremonial became idolatry. …

Next, or perhaps at the same time, Puritanism applied itself to morality. Broad as the reach of morality may be, it is distinct enough as an experience to be capable of purification. We may say that its destiny was to become what we know as sociology, a body of positivistic science. …

Then Puritanism worked upon politics. … Progress in this direction meant constitutionalism, parliamentarianism, republicanism. The population, not being composed exclusively of politicians, is inclined to delegate statecraft to those who profess it. …

It was but one step that Puritanism had to go from there into the world of business, where the material sciences are systematically applied. The rise of the modern business world is a development attendant upon the freedom which it has enjoyed; upon business for business’s sake, or pure business, or “laissez faire,” with such unconditioned principles as efficiency, technological improvement, and maximum productivity. …

All these exclusions and specializations, and many more, have been making modern life what it is. …

Poets are now under the influence of a perfectly arbitrary theory which I have called Puritanism. They pursue A, an aesthetic element thought always to have the same taste and to be the one thing desirable for poets. They will not permit the presence near it of M, the moral element, because that will produce the lemonade MA, and they do not approve of lemonade. In lemonade the A gets weakened and neutralized by the M. …

Now some poetry, so-called, is not even lemonade, for the ingredients have not been mixed, much less compounded. Lumps of morality and image lie side by side, and are tasted in succession. T.S. Eliot thinks that this has been the character of a great deal of English poetry since the age of Dryden. … It is decidedly one of the causes of that revulsion of feeling on the part of the modern poet which drives him away from the poetic tradition.

And that is Ransom’s Modernist gambit, justifying Modern Poetry’s “independence” from “morality” on the historical “fact” that modern life is now more “pure” than ancient life. But does Ransom’s analogy work? Is a lobbyist-influenced politician in a modern democratic society more “pure” than a Feudal lord, or king? Is the poetry of Allen Tate more “pure” than Shelley’s? Is efficiency and improvement and productivity in a specific area something which only arose in France in the 19th Century? Was it Modern Poetry’s destiny to gain a certain ascendency in the 20th century for the very same reason that drove Martin Luther to question the sincerity of the Catholic Church?

We think not. We strongly suspect that “Modernism” is nothing but a fancy word, and that John Crowe Ransom and T.S. Eliot are nothing but Highbrow Car Salesmen. Purely so, of course.

WINNER: BAUDELAIRE

8 Comments

  1. Andrew said,

    January 2, 2016 at 3:17 pm

    What a great post. It took 3 cups of tea and a sledding – break with my children before I was able to give it the attention it deserves by reading every word.

    [There is yet no general recognition of the possibility that an aesthetic effect may exist by itself, independent of morality or any other useful set of ideas. But the modern poet is intensely concerned with this possibility, and he has disclaimed social responsibility in order to secure this pure aesthetic effect. He cares nothing, professionally, about morals, or God, or native land. He has performed a work of dissociation and purified his art.]

    And I would add that the writer, as a Modernist spokesmouth, paved the way for poetry that is less interesting aesthetically than Warhol’s detergent boxes. What a dumb statement by Ransom, the ultimate mild-mannered parlor revolutionary. Brave red banners indeed ! What a pompous fellow. I don’t think he was being ironic at all – he probably fancied himself a bold pioneer of the brave new vanguard (yawn). Aesthetic effects cannot exist independently anymore than the sound of a tree falling in the forest of egghead theory can be perceived by the poetic ear.

    J.C. Ransom sounds like another overripe apricot murmuring to us about Cezanne from somewhere deep within the “foolish little bowl of fruits”.

    [He cares nothing, professionally, about morals, or God, or native land.]

    And that is why such poets bring literary shame to their native land as well as the craft of Poetry.

    [They pursue A, an aesthetic element thought always to have the same taste and to be the one thing desirable for poets. They will not permit the presence near it of M, the moral element, because that will produce the lemonade MA, and they do not approve of lemonade.]

    Ha ! And the dreaded MA must be a Master’s in Modern Lit/Poetry… producing a diluted, insipid beverage which was supposed to be refreshingly acid and sweet.

    This was a great read that I stumbled upon. How rich are the veins of poetic wisdom to be mined here at Scarriet. And how dull the Modernists truly are.

  2. Andrew said,

    January 2, 2016 at 3:35 pm

    This post caught my eye by mentioning in one compelling postic post not only Wallace Stevens, Rousseau, Hitler, Mao, Stalin, and Pol Pot, who were all terrible poets, but also Baudelaire and Frost – who were truly GREAT poets. (My mind is still not made up about Edna St. V Millay.)

    Sorry if I have bored you with this one before but somehow it seems fitting here:

    김칫국 A Chicken in Every Pol Pot 毛泽东

    Spoke Mao Zedong to Kim Jong Ill:
    “We languish here in deep red hell –
    Let us confer and analyze
    What factors revolutionize
    The contradictions still.”

    Replied Lil’ Kim: “The running dogs
    Beguiled by class and capital
    Have overdrawn and overspent.
    They bank on debt, and make lament
    And flounder in their fogs…

    Kim chee does stink –but tastes so good
    Do have some more, oh comrade Mao.
    Fermented cabbage goes so well
    With Hennessey and blondes (in hell)
    when Juche’s in da hood!”

    The Fearless Leader (now a shade)
    Responded thus: “Just give them time.
    Our doctrines spread, their God is dead
    Their sons shall sing ‘The East is Red’
    Our party’s got it made.”

    Lil Kim displayed a wicked grin.
    “Our rocket-launches make them fear
    They scold and cluck, and then they duck
    While Hillary tries to pass the buck
    I think we still could win…”

    The Chairman thought and sipped some fire
    in communistic reverie, and feeling very clever, he
    Replied to Ill: “This place we’ll fill
    with dead reactionaries still –
    fifth columns to inspire.

    Now let the thousand flowers bloom
    And let one thousand thoughts contend –
    Remember Ho? Remember ‘Nam?
    We triumphed over Uncle Sam –
    He’s limping toward his doom.”

    A wizened ghost now drifted in
    Because his name had been proclaimed
    A wispy beard (as yet unseared)
    Revealed the mastermind once feared:
    Old Uncle Ho Chi Minh !

    “Ho Ho – old friend! Draw near! Draw near,”
    Spoke Mao: “In solidarity
    We hail your work upon the earth
    You showed them what a war is worth
    You’re always welcome here.”

    “Ill Kim and I were wondering
    How best to make the forward leap –
    conspiring how to kill their cow
    and smoke their duck and drain their sow
    while they are buying bling.

    Ho Chi, old warrior, why the frown?
    Upon your wisdom now we wait.
    The forces red you bravely led
    You staked your claim until they bled
    And brought their nation down.”

    Old uncle Ho, the sage revered,
    did smolder with his cigarette.
    Viet Cong thought is hard to grasp
    It slithers like a jungle asp…
    He paused and stroked his beard.

    “You speak without the people’s light!
    I criticize in strongest terms
    Your revolutionary thought.
    We need to ask our friend Pol Pot
    How best to steer this fight.

    Such gradual change, a halfway measure
    stalls the Bourgeoisie’s demise.
    Our true Khmer Rouge was not a stooge
    of Kapital. His fame was huge
    for plundering their treasure.

    True, he had to purge his nation
    such is revolution, gents…
    The traitor classes see the masses,
    through reactionary glasses.
    Death or re-education!

    We ought to sow his rural seed
    for pure agrarian reform.
    The bodies in the rice can rot
    to fertilize the harvest plot –
    the people’s mouths to feed.”

    When Pol Pot heard his tactics lauded
    he flew in to join the jabber.
    “Take a tip from Kampuchea!
    Listen well and I will teach ya!”
    Kim and Mao applauded.

    “City folk are useless eaters
    glasses-wearing foes and cheaters!
    let them slave – and always save
    their corpses for the fertile grave
    Until they love their leaders.

    From the barrel power grows –
    (I don’t mean kim chee barrel, boys – )
    Now learn my way.We’ll have our say
    Their weakened states will wither away.”
    The Red dictator rose.

    Prepared to ramble on for hours
    (the way Fidel so loves to do)
    Pol Pot’s harangue now fired the gang
    like rockets falling on Da Nang
    emitting sparks in showers.

    Hell is known for lack of stasis –
    Sudden throes of quaking fire;
    fitful flares from from Satan’s lairs
    and constant similar affairs
    the population faces…

    Thus Saint Pol Pot, still naming names
    along with Mao and Kim-Jong Il
    while Ho Chi screamed, and then blasphemed
    were swept en masse, yet unredeemed
    into the surging flames.

    Yet still they plotted in the blaze
    with dialectic deviousness.
    Philosophizing, strategizing
    stinking sulphur brimstone rising;
    ghosts in the yellow haze…

    version with naked muses can be found here:

    http://tinyurl.com/kb4jfyw

    • maryangeladouglas said,

      January 2, 2016 at 9:54 pm

      I always felt a chill knowing that Mao wrote poetry. The thousand flowers blooming. God. the thousand million flowers ripped up by the roots and burned to the ground so to speak.

      • Andrew said,

        January 3, 2016 at 12:23 am

        Yes ! Too few people can appreciate the deathly humor of “Let One Thousand Flowers Bloom – Let One Thousand Schools of Thought Contend”. What a bunch of monsters all of them.

        • maryangeladouglas said,

          January 3, 2016 at 2:07 pm

          The exact right word. Have a good year Andrew. I’m leaving Scarriet. Take care. I can’t stay where it’s ok to insult William Shakespeare. They’re already eliminating the study of Shakespeare from many colleges and now some are advising the same in the high schools. We are ourselves on the verge of totalitarianism in the guise of democracy when self serving people of all colors are allowed to take the wheel and destroy the treasures of civilization so they can strut their poor hour on the stage. I just finished watching that film The Monuments Men and I wonder with all my heart: Where Are the Monuments Men in our country now when these things are happening right in front of our own eyeswithout even a shot being fired; the treasures of literature meant for the whole human race are being spit on as a fashion forward literary trend and there’s virtually no outcry at all. Mao had the Red Cultural Guard smash Ming vases as well as people. Smashing Shakespeare to bits has become the next new thing.

          • Andrew said,

            January 3, 2016 at 4:33 pm

            Well I hope you change your mind because I like your presence at Scarriet. Never decide such things in a passionate moment.

            • maryangeladouglas said,

              January 3, 2016 at 5:18 pm

              ENOUGH REASONS TO LEAVE

              when they sew your shadow to a wall,
              this is a reason, or before they do.
              when sweet waters are poisoned

              and they hand out the cups to little children
              and praise the cup bearers eagerly.
              when the good is mocked

              and all definitions changed accordingly

              and those who protest this

              are mocked and, even more,
              accuased of sowing discord.
              when real purity is deplored.

              when the face of God is erased

              from the chronicles of those
              who waste no time in
              applying for the position themselves.

              when those who say all manner of things
              shall be well stand aside with a smile
              and good manners

              to let the destroyers pass.

              mary angela douglas 3 january 2015

  3. maryangeladouglas said,

    January 2, 2016 at 10:11 pm

    Regarding John Crowe Ransom…

    WHO WAS JOHN WHITESIDE’S DAUGHTER

    even the bells don’t sing her name:
    painted in white wash on cotton clouds.
    the geese scatter distressed by a

    crystal shadow, at best;
    a girl in watercolour skirts the grounds.
    who is John Whiteside’s daughter

    what is an elegy without a name
    or was grief for her as weightless
    as the questions at the end of the chapter:

    [can you explain? what was The Poet
    trying to say,the Poet who signed
    his name to the Poem; for sure

    the Poet whose name endures]
    what is a watercolour in the rain,
    what is a watercoloured name

    dissolving here in a close reading
    when parents christen even children
    dead on arrival

    and etch it in stone, the christening name-
    if not in marble or the guilded monuments.
    she could have been anyone; a tiny doll soldier

    in the tomb of an unknown.
    well you know, how did her mother feel about that?
    does anyone know? that’s my question.

    did she softly cry not wanting to make a scene
    what kind of immemorial poem is this
    for my little girl…

    the angels took it away with them
    (I mean, her name)
    leaving behind the funeral train, the flowers;

    departing with
    her light, her apple white hours
    where God,at least, Who knew what to call her,

    [Alone, alone…the bells intone: she died alone]
    as they say in the South,
    called her home

    mary angela douglas 10 december 2015

    P.S. This poem is written as a response to John Crowe Ransom’s poem “Bells for John Whiteside’s Daughter” which is a strange poem to me and has been for some time much as I generally love his poetry. or rather I love the poet he almost became if he hadn’t been engaged in systematically killing his own lyrical tendencies in order to appear a more sophisticated, urbane poet.

    I have been vaguely troubled by this poem all my life and only recently figured out what I found distressing. He wrote this poem I guess as an elegy when the young daughter of his friend John Whiteside died. But there is no real feeling of grief for the little girl that died anywhere in the poem that I can see. Maybe it was in the drafts he threw out.

    There is just a pretty, generalized water colour though with lovely fairy tale impressions as he recalls seeing her from an upstairs window. That is the one saving grace note in the poem but it exists in isolation from the rest of the poem.

    This poem causes me grief every time I read it because the little girl’s name is never mentioned in the poem. Even colder, the poem is not even dedicated to her. This to me is going too far in using an event in actual life as a departure point for a poem. Compare the poem with Shelley’s elegy for Keats “I weep for Adonis, he is dead o weep for Adonis.” and you will see what I mean. Everyone knew he meant John Keats. John Crowe Ransom’s poem is tearless. He is “vexed” as one would be vexed by a simple everyday annoyance. What a callous word to use in the context. “vexed” at a small life taken that can never return.

    The one lovely fairytale image and I really do love that image of the little girl in a fairytale cloud and the goose speaking alas murmuring alas seems encapsulated in its own fragile bubble vaulted away from the antiseptic, clipped, brittle tone of the rest of the poem. I wish Ransom had made a different poem, one connected to the fairy tale cloud but that seems to be what he was fighting in himself, that unabashed lyricism, bringing it under steely control. Perhaps that’s what being a “Fugitive” poet was all about. Fugitive from the beautiful, freely, naturally expressed.

    Her “prim study propped” evokes the appearance of a mummy viewed at an archeological dig where certainly no one is thinking of her as someone’s daughter, or even child, having been mourned, but just as a museum curio, artifact. You can almost smell the coroded linen.


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